1 Daily Oral Language Week 1Grade 12 Proofreading Sentences 1 a. my friend hes the boy wearing the blue coat don’t like to skateboard but he does like to in-line skate b. On january mr canesco the principal of washington high school dedicated its new library

2 Daily Oral Language Week 1Grade 12 Correct Sentences 1 a. My friend, the boy wearing the blue coat, doesn’t like to skateboard but does like to in-line skate. b. On January 10, 2000, Mr. Canesco, the principal of Washington High School, dedicated its new library.

3 Daily Oral Language Week 1Grade 12 Proofreading Sentences 2 dear sir or madam enclosed is a claim for damage to my truck sincerely steve nelson

4 Daily Oral Language Week 1Grade 12 Correct Sentences 2 Dear Sir or Madam: Enclosed is a claim for damage to my truck. Sincerely, Steve Nelson

5 Daily Oral Language Week 1Grade 12 Proofreading Sentences 3 a. who did you ask about the interpretation of the poem ulysses jason asked since your version is different from ms shapiros b. i thought allison could of broke her ankle but the doctor said she had torn 2 tendons

6 Daily Oral Language Week 1Grade 12 Correct Sentences 3 a. “Whom did you ask about the interpretation of the poem ‘Ulysses,’” Jason asked, “since your version is different from Ms. Shapiro’s?” b. I thought Allison could have broken her ankle, but the doctor said she had torn two tendons.

7 Daily Oral Language Week 1Grade 12 Proofreading Sentences 4 a. prof rolando tosca the renowned anthropologist has gave many lectures that are now available in his book social rituals in the Nile valley b. in an attempt to paint the shutters on our house my wrist was sprained when I fell off of the ladder

8 Daily Oral Language Week 1Grade 12 Corrected Sentences 4 a. Prof. Rolando Tosca, the renowned anthropologist, has given many lectures that are now available in his book Social Rituals in the Nile Valley. b. In an attempt to paint the shutters on our house, I fell off the ladder and sprained my wrist.

9 Daily Oral Language Week 1Grade 12 Proofreading Sentences 5 a. several of the very unique sculptures was exhibited at the getty museum before being sent on a world wide tour b. irregardless of the outcome of this contest no one especially a child should be made to feel like a loser

10 Daily Oral Language Week 1Grade 12 Corrected Sentences 5 a. Several of the unique sculptures were exhibited at the Getty Museum before being sent on a worldwide tour. b. Regardless of the outcome of this contest, no one – especially a child – should be made to feel like a loser.